Definition
Although most of the later KISS constructions are defined in terms of function, prepositional phrases are defined simply as a matter of identify. Students can simply be given a list of words that function as prepositions. Those words, plus whatever answers the question "What?" after them, create prepositional phrases. KISS defines adjectives and adverbs by function: whatever modifies a noun or a pronoun functions as, and therefore is considered to be, an adjective. Whatever modifies a verb, adjective, or adverb, is likewise an adverb.
When
Third grade is probably the ideal
time to teach prepositional phrases. By third grade most students have
had some general work with recognizing nouns, pronouns, and verbs, and
that work will help them, for example, distinguish the "to" as a sign of
an infinitive from the "to" that functions as a preposition. And, if the
students are being taught to identify "all" the prepositional phrases in
passages written by themselves or by their peers, the research clearly
shows that they will not run across a lot of phrases that have clauses
or other advanced constructions as the objects of prepositions. For instruction
to be effective, it is important that students meet a few sentences that
may confuse them. In this respect, the writing of third graders is "just
right" for prepositional phrases.
I am frequently
asked why the KISS the approach begins with prepositional phrases instead
of with subjects and verbs. The question is so frequent because we have
been lulled to sleep by the traditional approaches to grammar. These approaches
still work on the assumption that the students have to be taught everything
about grammar, from the bottom up. If this assumption were true, then subjects
and verbs would be the place to begin. But even third graders are already masters
of English. They have learned more about grammar than we will ever teach
them in our classrooms. Their knowledge is, of course, subconscious. Our
objective is to make enough of that subconscious knowledge conscious so
that they can intelligently discuss questions of style and errors.
One reason for beginning with
prepositional phrases has already been suggested (the high number of words
that appear in them), but prepositional phrases are also the best place
to start because relatively few words function as prepositions. Third graders
can learn to recognize prepositions, and thus prepositional phrases, far
more easily than they could subject / verb/ complement patterns -- especially
since, without knowledge of such phrases, they would confuse the objects
of some prepositions with the subjects of some verbs.
As third graders look for prepositional
phrases, they will meet some with compound objects (with Bill and
Sue) and perhaps even a few cases of ellipsis. By the end of third
grade, students could be taught to recognize almost all prepositional phrases
with compound objects, but probably not those involving ellipsis. Teachers
should probably explain these cases using and explaining the terms "compound"
and "ellipsis," but I would not expect students to learn these terms at
this level. I would not, in other words, test them on the terms. Most of
the terms we know, we have learned ostensively, and, as students hear the
terms used in context, they will learn them. The important skill for third
graders is to be able to place parentheses around all the simple and compound
prepositional phrases.
The education standards of most
states include recognition of the parts of speech for second or third graders.
Some schools may therefore want to have third graders learn to recognize
simple adjectives and adverbs. One common question
about the KISS Approach concerns why adjectives and adverbs are not treated
as a distinct level. The answer is that students do not need to be able
to identify adjectives and adverbs to move on to the next level.
Working with college Freshmen
in a composition course, for example, I devote only about ten class hours
to syntax. As a result, I spend about five minutes explaining adjectives
and adverbs. I quickly give them (without expecting them to memorize them)
the KISS definitions of the two terms. Then I point out that they already
unconsciously understand these concepts, and I show them a sentence such
as "The old man slowly walked to the park." I ask them to break the sentence
into phrases -- smaller multi-word chunks that form the parts of the sentence.
No one ever gives me "man slowly" as a chunk. I then point out that "The"
and "old" chunk to the noun "man" so they are adjectives; "slowly" chunks
to the verb "walked" so it is an adverb. Thereafter, I do not expect them
to identify normal adjectives and adverbs -- they can simply tell me what
the words chunk to. It is, after all, their understanding of these "chunking"
relationships that we are after.
I should note here that many of
my students have problems recognizing predicate adjectives because they
do not recognize most adjectives as such. Within the limits of individual
courses, however, there is only so much that any teacher can do. Most of
my students come to me with little, if any, conscious knowledge of grammatical
concepts. It would be nice (and much better for our students) if, as a
profession, we could work as a team, later grades building on what has
been taught -- and assimilated -- in earlier grades. But currently that
is not the situation.
Required Objective:
Students should be able to identify all the "simple" prepositional phrases in randomly selected passages from their own writing and reading materials. ("Simple" excludes phrases that have complements with gerunds, clauses, or other advanced constructions as their objects.) The primary purpose of this required objective is simply to enable students to disregard the words in prepositional phrases when they are attempting to find S/V/C patterns.
Memorization Required: "And," "or," and "but" join equal parts of speech or constructions.
At this level, students do not need to know that these are called "coordinating conjunctions," but they do need to recognize their function in phrases such as "Sue went with Sally or Sarah." Older students, whose sentences are naturally more complex, often place clauses between the compound objects of prepositions. They may therefore find "ellipsis" a clarifying concept. One of my students wrote:
The stage at the Bucks County Playhouse impresses any actor who performs there with such things as the thirty-six fly ropes that line the stage left wall and the roof that rises three stories.In analyzing sentences such as this one, my students usually prefer to insert an ellipsed "as" before "roof":
. . . with such things (as the thirty-six fly ropes) that line the stage left wall and (*as* the roof) that rises three stories.Neither of these terms should probably be required at KISS Level One, but they can be used to explain many of the infrequent cases that students are not yet expected to understand.
Suggested Approaches to Instruction:
Give the students an instructional handout on prepositional phrases. (See below.) In class, use a short passage (two or three sentences) to demonstrate what you expect them to do. Then, either as an in-class assignment, or for homework, distribute copies of another short passage (double-spaced, and no more than half a page) for the students to do. Review their work in class. Repeat the exercise with different passages until most of the students can quickly identify all of the simple phrases. If you are using the Grammar Game to review homework, you will easily recognize when this time comes. Otherwise, you can use a quick assessment quiz.
Assessment:
We can lead students to knowledge,
but we can't make them study. Don't grade homework. Once you feel that
most students can recognize most phrases, give a short assessment
quiz -- no longer than three sentences, using a passage that the students
have not previously analyzed. (Remember that you have to grade these. The
longer the quiz, the longer it will take you to grade it.) If the
passage includes phrases with advanced constructions in them, simply ignore
these phrases. Count the number of simple phrases in the passage. Count
the number of these that were identified correctly. Subtract one for each
time in which the student marked as a phrase something that is not. Divide
the result by the number of simple phrases. (This procedure sounds more
difficult to do than it actually is.) The results of the quiz will
probably be an inverted bell curve, with most students getting either an
A or an F.
If instructional time permits,
I would suggest that teachers give at least two, three would be better,
such assessment quizzes. (This assumes that not all the students aced the
first one.) If you need or want to give a formal grade for this work, you
might want to drop each student's lowest quiz grade -- or just count the
last or the highest grade. It is, after all, what the students have finally
learned that should count.
Class Time Required:
Enabling almost all of the students
to identify almost all of the prepositional phrases in samples of their
own or their peers' writing will probably require the equivalent of four
or five 50-minute class sessions (or a total of 200 to 250 minutes)
The first session will probably require a full class period since the teacher
will have to distribute the instructional material, explain the objectives,
and demonstrate what is expected by going over a short passage in class.
Following the initial class period of instruction, teachers will want to
schedule instruction differently. Some may want to assign a single sentence
to be reviewed in two or three minutes at the beginning of each class period.
Other teachers will prefer to give students longer passages (a half page,
double spaced) as homework assignments, perhaps one a month. In estimating
the total amount of time required, I'm predicting that four to six such
assignments should suffice, with 25 minutes of class time spent on reviewing
each. In a subsequent class, devote five minutes to an assessment
quiz. Once most of the students get most of the phrases correct, they have
reached the objective.
In the KISS Approach, prepositional
phrases would be the only formal grammar studied in third grade. Even those
teachers who are not particularly interested in teaching grammar shouldn't
mind devoting four or five class hours to it (out of an entire year), since
they would know that they would be sending their students into fourth grade
well prepared to build on what they have learned. It is important that
instruction be spread across the school year; otherwise, students have
a tendency to forget. But once students have had the basic instruction,
this can easily be done simply by asking the students, for example, to
underline two or three prepositional phrases in something they are writing.
Another way to do this would be to have the students discuss some particularly
interesting prepositional phrases in something they are reading. Such review,
which need not be time-consuming, would obviously extend beyond traditional
textbook grammar to questions of writing and style.
Obviously, teachers who have to
start at Level One and who want to get students into Level Three will have
to scheduled the four or five hours needed for prepositional phrases in
the early part of the year. Teachers who want to go into some of the desired
objectives will probably want to do likewise, perhaps by aiming for basic
recognition at the end of the first half of the year so that students can
devoted their "grammar time" in the second half to some of the desired
objectives.
Desired Objectives
The Functions of Prepositional Phrases
As they analyze passages, have students draw an arrow from the preposition to the word that the prepositional phrase chunks to (modifies). A further step is to have the students indicate the syntactic function of the phrase. They can do this by placing a "J" by the arrow for adjectival phrases, and a "V" by the arrow for adverbial phrases. This activity is helpful in that it teaches students that constructions, as well as single words, can function as adjectives or adverbs. Adding this step, however, will require an introduction to the concept of interjections. Most prepositional phrases function as adjectives or as adverbs, but in analyzing randomly selected texts (including their own writing), students will run across a few phrases, of course, that function as interjections.
Einarsson's Approach to Embedding
Whereas the required objective is limited to identifying individual prepositional phrases, Robert Einarsson's approach to teaching prepositional phrases (See Chapter Seven.) introduces students to the important concept of embedding. If time permits, teachers might want to spend a class period or two using Einarsson's approach. Showing students how one construction can be embedded in another may improve some students' reading skills. I have been told by reading teachers that the basic problem of most poor readers is that they read words, not phrases. Thus, Einarsson's approach may help these students see and better comprehend the phrases in texts. It will also prepare students to more easily understand the embedding of clauses in Level Three.
Fill-in-the-Blanks
A fill-in-the-blank exercise such as the one discussed in Chapter Seven (based on Welty's "A Worn Path") can be an enjoyable change of pace. It can also help students recognize prepositional phrases, and, if shared and discussed in class, can help students see how important prepositional phrases (and adjectives and adverbs) are in establishing details of setting (both time and place) and of characterization.
Vision and Revision
Give students a complete
short passage -- a fable, a joke, etc -- and ask them to revise it by eliminating
as many prepositional phrases as they can. Have the students discuss their
revisions, including the effects of the omissions. Then have students revise
the same initial passage by adding as many prepositional phrases as they
can without creating nonsense. Again, have the class discuss the results
of their work.
Repeat the preceding exercise,
but have each student select his or her own passage for revision. Have
the students explain to the class the effects of their revisions.
Introduce students to the
continuum of abstract and concrete words. In class, give students five
minutes to review a piece of their own writing to see if they can replace
abstract objects of prepositions (with the animals) with words that
are more concrete (with the lions, tigers, and apes). At the end
of the five minutes, have the students report to their classmates any changes
that they were able to make.
Analysis of their Own Writing
Once most students can recognize most prepositional phrases, have them select a short sample of their own writing and make a double-spaced, ink copy. Tell them to use a pencil to analyze it for prepositional phrases. Have them work in groups of three or four to check each other's work while you circulate to answer any questions that may arise. Once they have done this, you might want to extend the exercise into a statistical one. Have the students count the number of words in the prepositional phrases and divide it by the total number of words in their respective passages. In addition to showing them how much they can already analyze, the statistics can lead into discussions of details and quality. You may want to follow the statistical analysis by asking the students to revise their passages by adding prepositional phrases. In class, have the students discuss the effects of this revision.
Style
Send students on a "Treasure Hunt"
to find two published sentences that begin with prepositional phrases and
two that do not. Have them discuss what they found, including how often,
on average, sentences begin with prepositional phrases.
Show students how some phrases
can be moved in a sentence: "On Sundays they went to the park." "They went
to the park on Sundays." Have the students write two or three sentences
(twice) with the same phrase in different positions.
Have the students write their
own examples of Einarsson's aligned and embedded phrases.
Logic
Third graders are not ready for
advanced study of logic, but Hume's three categories -- identity, extension,
and cause/effect -- (See Chapter Nine) can easily be used with third
graders. The best way to do this would probably be to show them a short
paragraph on an overhead, and, as they identify the prepositional phrases,
discuss the "logical" function of the phrase. Does it emphasize identity
(the man in the green shirt, the house on the corner)? Does it reflect
extension in time or space (for six miles, after three days)? Or
does it reflect cause/effect (because of his accident)?
After this introduction, give
them all a copy of another short paragraph and have them identify the phrases
and their logical functions. Review (and discuss) this assignment briefly
in class. Then ask the students to identify such phrases in their own writing.
(Or you can ask them to add phrases that express identity, extension, and/or
cause/effect to something that they have already written.) Have them work
in small groups to discuss the effects of these phrases.
My Instructional Handouts
The following are the handouts I give students for prepositional phrases and for adjectives and adverbs. You can use or adapt them in any way you wish.
Level 1. Prepositional Phrases (Compounding and Ellipsis)
Directions for exercises: Put parentheses ( ) around each prepositional phrase in the text.
Prepositional phrases are relatively easy to learn. Simply put, a prepositional phrase is a preposition plus whatever answers the question "What?" after it. The following list includes most of the words that can function as prepositions:
about, above, across, after, against, along, among, around, as, at, before, behind, beneath, beside, between, beyond, by, despite, during, except, for, from, in, inside, into, like, near, of, off, on, onto, outside, over, since, through, to*, toward, under, until, up, upon, with, within, without, aside from, as to, because of, instead of, out of, regardless of, "but" when it means "except," "past" when it means "by."
*"to" plus a noun or pronoun is a prepositional phrase; "to" plus a verb is not. This difference is expected to cause you some problems, but as you review exercises in class, the difference will become clear.
Learning to Recognize Prepositions
As the list above should
suggest, only a limited number of words can function as prepositions. Your brain
already knows what prepositions are. It has to, since you use these words
correctly day in and day out. What you are trying to do is to make that
unconscious knowledge conscious so you can understand how prepositional
phrases fit within sentence patterns. The sooner you learn to recognize
prepositions, the easier your task will be. Different students find different
approaches to this task to be most helpful.
Some students prefer to
memorize the list. Some of these students find that copying the list (by
hand) several times is the best way to start remembering it. Others simply
make one copy (or print-out) and take it with them wherever they go. They
then study it several times throughout the day -- while waiting for a class
to begin, while waiting for a red light, while brushing their teeth, etc.
Because most of the prepositions
can denote relationships of place and time, some students prefer a more
conceptual approach. They visualize a house or plane, and then think about
the fact that something can be in, inside, out of, outside, on, under,
above, before, in front of it, etc. If you take this approach, don't
forget the temporal relationships -- something can happen before, after,
during, until, or since something else, etc. Sheila Harper, who teaches
developmental English and math at Colorado Northwestern Community College,
has noted that
In eighth grade, Miss Morganstern, my English teacher, taught me how to identify prepositions in a short lesson: "of" and any words that fit into the blank in one of these sentences are prepositions (or words that explain the relative position of two objects in space or time): "The squirrel ran __________ the log(s)," or "I dropped my books __________ class(es)." For me, that simple explanation and quick rule-of-thumb took away the mystery of prepositions.Solving the mystery of prepositions is not difficult, and you will save yourself a lot of time if you begin by becoming familiar with the words that can function as prepositions. Some students choose not to do this. Instead, they either guess, or constantly have to look up words on the list while they are doing the homework.
Identifying Prepositional Phrases
Having found in a text a word that can function as a preposition, form a question with that word followed by "what," i.e., "since what?" If whatever in the sentence answers that question forms a sentence of its own, the construction is not a prepositional phrase:
The sun hasn’t shone since we arrived.Otherwise, it is:
The sun hasn’t shone {since our arrival.}Remember that "to" plus a verb (to walk, to read, to get, to have, to do) is not a prepositional phrase.
Some Final Advice
Work systematically. Begin
with the first sentence in the assigned text. Do the best you can to find
all the prepositional phrases in it. Then continue, sentence by sentence,
until you have completed the assignment. Students who ignore this advice
roam all over the text, marking a phrase in the middle, then one at the
end, etc. As a result, they are never sure when they are finished, and
they generally miss many phrases.
Don't give up. The exercises
in most grammar textbooks are designed such that the early problems are
easy, with the sentences getting a little more difficult near the end.
But even the most difficult sentences in the typical grammar books don't
approach the complexity of the sentences that you yourself already write.
Since you will be working with randomly selected texts, you will be dealing
with some difficult sentences, and they may appear early in the text. Don't
give up. When you find a difficult sentence, do the best you can with it
and then move on to the next sentence. (Remember that you are expected
to make some mistakes.) In most cases you will find later sentences that
are much easier to analyze.
Level 1.A. Adding Adjectives and Adverbs
Adjectives and adverbs are words that modify (or change) the meaning of other words in a sentence. The sentence Boys are silly. applies to all boys, but we can change the meaning, for example, by saying The boys are silly. The addition of the adjective "The" changes the meaning, limiting it to only certain boys whom both the speaker and the listeners recognize. English contains thousands of adjectives and adverbs that you already know and use, most often correctly. The easiest way to learn to recognize adjectives and adverbs is to learn to recognize nouns, pronouns, and verbs, and then use your knowledge of English and the following rules:
Adjectives: Whatever modifies a noun or pronoun is an adjective.Consider the sentence The pretty little puppy jumped gleefully around the yard. A little though should lead you to the conclusion that "The," "pretty," and "little" describe (or modify) the noun "puppy." Thus they are adjectives.
Adverbs: Whatever modifies a verb, an adjective, or another adverb is an adverb.Further thought about the sentence The pretty little puppy jumped gleefully around the yard. should lead you to see that "gleefully" and "around the yard" modify the verb "jumped." "Gleefully" describes how it jumped, and "around the yard" explains where it jumped. Thus "gleefully" and "around the yard" are adverbs. Note that both adjectives and adverbs need not be a single word.