Adjective to "people"] my mom, my dad and my two brothers 

their names are Ray and Paul.  I live {at 328 Sandy Dr.} 

[Adverb to "live" ] First I think I will start {with my dad.} [Adverb

to "will start" ] My dad works {at Optimal Arts.} [Adverb to 

"works"] He travels pretty much. He goes all {over the 

place} ^{Note #1} asking {for money} [Adverb to "asking" ^{Note #2}]

{for his company.} [Adverb to "asking" or Adjective to "money"] My 

dad's name is Bill. I will talk {about my mom.} [Adverb to 

"will talk"] Well she is pretty tall and she is also pretty. Everyday

she stays home and watches my brother {except when he goes

{to preschool.} [Adverb to "goes"]} [Adverb to "watches" ^{Note #3}]

My mom's name is Sarah. I will talk {about my big brother.} 

[Adverb to "will talk"] He likes to play golf a lot. His best is an 

eighty-two {on eighteen holes} [Adverb to "is" or Adjective to 

"eighty-two"] {from the men's tee's.} [Adverb to "is" or Adjective to 

"eighty-two"] And that is good {from the men's tee's.} [Adverb to

"is"] My brother is 13 His name is Ray. Now my little brother 

Paul. He can be a really pain sometimes. Like when I am 

talking {on the phone} [Adverb to "am talking"] and sitting {on 

the sofa} [Adverb to "sitting"] he starts jumping {on the sofa} 

[Adverb to "jumping"] and I start bouncing up and down. But I

like him a lot. He is three years old. His name is Paul.

     I will talk {about myself.} [Adverb to "will talk"]  Well I 

like playing golf also. My best score {on eighteen holes} 

[Adjective to "score"] is an eighty-six {from the ladie's tee's.}

[Adverb to "is" or Adjective to "eighty-six"] That is really good {for 

me. [Adverb to "is"]My best {from the men's tee's} [Adjective to

"best" ^{Note #4}] {on nine holes} [Adjective to "best" ^{Note #4}] is a 

forty-six {on the hardest nine.} [Adverb to "is" or Adjective to 

"forty-six"] I am nine years old. 

     I will talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.} [Adverb to "will 

talk"] Well he is a four legged creature He is a dog. He has 

brown and black fur. I like him a lot.  He is eleven years old. 

Yesterday was his birthday. My house is mosty made {of 

bricks} [Adverb to "is made"] and the other part is made {out of 

something else} [Adverb to "is made"] I don't know what it is 

though. 

     I live {at 423 Sandy Drive.} [Adverb to "live"] My house is 

pretty big. We have a big back yard. I have the biggest 

bedroom {in the house} [Adverb to "biggest"] {out of five 

rooms.} [Adverb to "biggest"] Our basement is big. We have a

pinball machine and a big ping-pong table. Most {of the time}

[Adjective to "most"] I stay downstairs. Because it is cool {down 

there.} [Adverb to "is"^{Note #5}] After I come in when it is hot 

outside I go down {in the basement.} [Adverb to "go"] Then I 

get cold so I go upstairs. My brother's room is the second 

biggest {in the house.} [Adjective to ellipsed "room" or Adverb to 

"is"] My parent's room is {down the hall} [Adverb to "is"] when 

you walk in. My little brothers room is {in the hall} [Adverb to

"is"] also. So is the bathroom. We have a living room and a 

family room and a kitchen. Well that is all {about my house.}

[Adjective to "all"]