Dr. Vavra's Main Menu

Overview of Dr. Vavra's
Work on Grammar

Cobweb Corner

The 1986 Study

Record Number: W7N12
Transcript of the Student's Text

Back to Seventh Grade Writers' Menu

     I have double-spaced the text so that teachers can simply print it out and use it for exercises or for their own analysis. (Name was changed.)

Mrs. Lane

      When I was in the third grade, I had one of the niciest 

teachers in the school. Her name is Mrs Lane. She would do a 

lot just so you would pass her class. She always would help 

you with anything. Sometimes she would even take you out 

for pizza. When she took you out there was no limit. But I still 

did not eat a lot of pizza. Some of the time she would even 

take us to her house. When we got to her house we would 

play games wile she would fix us something to eat. Then 

when we finish eating we would play some more games. Mrs 

Lane has two children I think she has two girls. I only know 

met her daughter once the oldest one. I never met her husband 

but I know she is married. I don't even know his name I just 

seen him before The way she talks her husband is nice like her. 

I will only find out if I ever meet him. I might not ever meet 

him. I might not ever meet him since Mrs Lane was my third 

grade teacher. That was about four years ago. But know she 

teachest my little sister. She says Mrs Lane is still nice. She 

might even be nicer. I wish she could teach me now instead of 

some of the teachers that teach me now. Who knows she mite 

teach me when I get in High School if she gets switched by 

luck. That would proble be the best thing that's happened to 

me in school.