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     I have double-spaced the text so that teachers can simply print it out and use it for exercises or for their own analysis.

Skate Boards

      There are many different kinds of skateboards company 

like G&S. Powell Parrlta, Visions, Sims. Most pupular kind is 

Vision Most people have the vision with the Lady on the 

bottom. There are many kinds of tricks like the sweeper and the 

boneless are the most pupular.  They have a half pipe wich you 

ride up one side and do a trick then you come down the other 

side. Most skateboards are not fit to be rode they have truck 

crakes wich might breake on you.  or the weels are caved and 

could come off any time.  Then you have what is called a birdie 

wich will rise you up on to the sidewalk it only cost $6.99 on 

sale. Then you have what is called reply sticks are the best pair 

of rails you can get for a skate board  they help the birdie get 

you up on the sidewalk. When you are up on the sidewalk you 

are supposed to do a sweeper off of the side walk then ride 

away. Then you have the use bone wich protects the front of 

your board on everything from breaking up and tearing off.  

Then last but not least you have the weels. The best pair of 

weels are the crossbones made for everything.  You can do 

slides. They are mostly made for street ridders but the are the 

lights weels for a skate board in the world.