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     I have double-spaced the text so that teachers can simply print it out and use it for exercises or for their own analysis.

My Daddy

      My Daddy is the best dad in the world to me because he 

listens to me and helps me when I need it and when I dont.  He 

also paysenit to me and punish me when I do wrong, when I 

dont he gives money or takes me places and teach me things. 

Things like how to hold a gun, and when I got my four wheeler 

thought me how to ride it the right way, like in the snow and on

rough surface because if I got hurt he said he would'nt know 

what to do. He also takes me fishing in the summer at lake ania, 

and though me how to water sky.  He taking me on a vacation to

californa to visit my aunt.  I'n the winter we and my family fo 

to manie to go sking and hunting.  I wish I could spend more 

time with him but he has to work he gets two vacation. One of 

those is in the winter and one is in the summer that is the late 

summer I'n winter its about the middle of october when my 

birthday is so he can buy me a preacent, I will be 13 years old 

I'm glad because have only have two more years until I can 

drive. My dad is going to teach me. That's why he is the best 

dad in the world to me