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       \-\Once I went fishing*GerNu01 {with one} {of my friends} {to a river} \C\and I still can't believe [RNDOwhat happened {to us} there.] \-\We decided to camp*INFDO04 out there. \-\We took our bikes {up a old bike trail} [RAJFthat we found.] \-\It was halfway burried=PV {under lots} {of weeds.} \-\It went so close {to the river's edge} [RAVFthat [LAVFif you sliped] your a gonner.] \-\We went {through it} any way "as daring#PPA05 [RAVFas we were"] and almost slipped=CV {off the edge.} \-\[LAVFWhen we were fishing] we both caught  three fish {in an hour.} \-\I cought about two cat fish and one carp=CC and two bass=CC alltogether {in a long hour and a half.} \-\We both cought about ten {to twenty} times.#NuA05 \-\I think [RNDOthat I cought more fish.] \-\{In the morning} we walked up {to the store} to get*INFAV05 some night cralers. \-\[LAVFWhen we got back] we found out [RNDOthat our fish excaped.] \-\Me and Brian=CS were chowing {on potato chips and pop.} \-\All#NuA01{of a sudden} a helicopter landed right {in the river} \C\and they pulled uzis {on us.} \-\They took us {to Iran} {as prisoners.} \-\They wanted the US to give*INFDO13 then four trillon dollers apeace#NuA01 {for exchange} {for us.} \-\We stole there uzies [RAVFbecause we were gun experts.] \-\Then we shot most {of the Iranians} then took=CV the chooper back {to the fishing hole.} \-\[LAVFWhen we got back] we noticed [RNDOthat there was a fish {on the line.}] \-\It was a large moth bass fifteen feet#NuA02 long.#PPA03
 

 
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