Words = 137
IU = 30 of 33
W/MC = 10.5
TSC/MC = .15
W/SCL1 = 6.5
L2+SC/MC = 0
List of Students' Versions
Syntactic Structure
Student 079
IU's Original
% W in PP = 31

Passive F Verbs = 8

Compounds
MC= 0
     Frag = 0
     CS = 1
     RO = 0
Subjects = 0
F Verbs = 5
Complements = 1

Sub Clauses
     Level 1 = 2
     Level 2 = 0
     Level 3 = 0

       \-\A type {of metal} called*GiveM02 aluminum is made=PV {through many processes.} \-\Aluminum is an abundant source {of metal} and is used=PV=CV {in various forms.} \-\Aluminum is processed=PV {from bauxite} [RAJFwhich is an ore.] \-\Bauxite has the features {of clay} and contains=CV many other substances. \-\The first step {in the production} is the removal {of the other substances.} \-\Workmen grind the bauxite and put=CV it {in pressurized tanks.} \-\Those other substances form a mass, \,\removal {of the mass}Note #1 is done=PV {with filters.} \-\A liquid remains {in the tanks} and is put=CV=PV {through many other processes} [RAJFwhere it yields a chemical, a powdery-white chemical;#App03 alumina.#App01] \-\Alumina contains aluminum and oxygen.=CC \-\Electricity is then used=PV to separate*INFAV06 aluminum {from the oxygen.} \-\FInally a metal is formed,=PV lightweight#PPA01 and a bright luster.Note #2 \-\Aluminum has been produced=PV and comes=CV {in many forms.}
Types of Noun Clauses Types of Adjective Clauses
L-DO   M-DO   R-DO   L-Full   M-Full   R-Full  2
L-PN   M-PN   R-PN   L-Red   M-Red   R-Red  
L-OP   M-OP   R-OP   Types of Adverbial Clauses
L-DS   M-DS   R-DS   L-Full   M-Full   R-Full  
L-SU   M-SU   R-SU   L-Red   M-Red   R-Red  
L-AP   M-AP   R-AP   Interjections as Clauses
Left   Mid   Right  
A note on Left, Mid, and Right Branching
Infinitives Other
Type No. Words Type No. Words Type No. Words
Dir Obj     DO Ell     NuA    
Pred N     Obj Prep     Inj    
Subject     Del Sub     RCm    
Appositive     Interj     App  2 4 
Adjective     Adverb  1 6  Dr A    
Gerunds D Subj    
Dir Obj     Pred N     PPA  1 1 
Obj Prep     Subject     Noun Absolutes
Del Sub     Appositive     Adv    
Interj     Subj    
Gerundives (Participles) Dir Obj    
Left     Mid  1 2  Obj Prep    
Right     Pred N    

1. "removal of which" would eliminate the comma-splice.
2. Did the post-positioned adjective (very rare in these revisions) cause the problem with "a bright luster"? The post-positioned adjective is created by the deletion of a pronoun and verb (*which is* light-weight). Could that deletion have carried over, erroneously, to "*which has* a bright luster"?