Key to Abbreviations % W in PP: The number of words in prepositional phrases divided by the total number of words. Appositive: A construction in which the syntactic connection is established by identity of meaning: "Aluminum, a metal, is abundant and has many uses." App/MC: The total number of appositives divided by the total number of main clauses. Averages:
There are all kinds of problems in computing averages ("mean," "mode,"
etc.), but I have decided to stick with simple averages, both because it
is best understood by the general public and because it probably best reflects
the "average" work required of the reader's working memory (STM).
Branching -- Left, Mid, and Right: Left branching constructions appear before the subject and verb in the clause in which they are embedded. In mid branching, the construction appears between the subject and verb, and in right, it appears after: Left: [When Sarah saw Bill,] he left.Most grammarian consider right branching to be more common. Walker Gibson has suggested that left branching suggests a more organized mind because the writer/speaker must already "see" the main clause before writing the subordinate. CCm/FV: The total number of compounded complements divided by the total number of finite verbs. CMC/MC: The total number of compounded main clauses divided by the total number of main clauses. Compounds: An obvious question is the degree to which students used simple compound (rather than subordinating structures) to combine sentences. MC = Compound Main Clauses; Subjects = Compound Subjects of finite verbs; F Verbs = Compound Finite Verbs; Complements = Compound Complements (Direct Objects, Predicate Nouns, or Predicate Adjectives). Fragments (Frag), Comma Splices (CS), and Run-ons (RO) are also counted here because they probably reflect attempts at compounding main clauses. CS/MC: The total number of coma-splices divided by the total number of main clauses. CSu/FV: The total number of compound subjects divided by the total number of finite verbs. CVb/FV: The total number of compound finite verbs divided by the total number of finite verbs. Delayed Subject: Aan empty "it" usually fills the normal subject slot, and the meaningful subject is delayed until later in the sentence: "It is interesting that the delayed subject is not often discussed by traditional grammarians." DO Ellipsed (Infinitive): A concept based on transformational theory which replaces the objective and subjective complements of traditional grammar. It is most often seen in sentences such as "They elected Bill president." in which "Bill president" is considered a nexus based on an ellipsed "to be." The infinitive phrase (with its subject, complement, and modifiers, is the complement of the finite verb. (Note the similarity to "They wanted Bill to be president.") Embedded Level of Subordinate Clauses: Embedding levels can be a very complicated question, which, someday, I may address in more detail. Currently, KISS considers only embedded levels of subordinate clauses. A subordinate clause embedded at Level 1 is directly related to the main clause: "This is the house [that I lived in]." A level 2 embedding is a clause within a Level 1: "This is the house [that, [when I was young,] I lived in]." Level 3 is within a level 2, etc. Except for things such as "The House that Jack Built," writers rarely get beyond level 4. Frag/MC: The total number of fragments divided by the total number of main clauses. Gn/MC: The total number of gerunds divided by the total number of main clauses. Gve/MC: The total number of gerundives (participles) divided by the total number of main clauses. Inf/MC: The total number of infinitives divided by the total number of main clauses. ("Infinitives" that form part of a finite verb phrase (have to go, am going to go) are not counted. L2+SC/MC: The total number of subordinate clauses that are embedded within other subordinate clauses: "We saw the boy [who was reading the book [that you recommended.]]" Level 1: These numbers reflect the total number of subordinate clauses embedded at different levels. See "L2+SC/MC" above. MC Long: The longest main clause in the passage. MC Short: The shortest main clause in the passage. MC Var: This is an attempt to calculate variety
in main clause length. This is something that teachers often talk about,
but relatively little research has been done about it. It was, I believe,
Edward Corbett who suggested that this could be measured by counting the
words in each sentence, and then looking at the number of sentences that
are ten or fifteen percrent above or below the average length. This approach
seems faulty, both for its use of the sentence (instead of the main clause)
as the basic yardstick, and also because it does not take into consideration
the rhythm, or the sequential location of the sentences in the text.
NC / TSC; AdjC /TSC; AdvC / TSC; InjC / TSC:
Noun
clauses, adjectival clauses, adverbial clauses, and clauses used as Interjections,
expressed as a percentage of the total number of subordinate clauses. Obviously,
this is an attempt to look at which types of clauses writers use most often.
Noun Absolutes: This construction usually consists of a noun modified by a gerundive. Passive F Verbs: Passive Finite Verbs. Because the Aluminum passage describes a process, one obvious question is the extent to which students used passive verbs. PPA: A Post-positioned adjective. This construction appears to be a late-bloomer based on the reduction of a subordinate clause -- "He was an old man, who was tired and fragile." --> "He was an old man, tired and fragile." PV/FV: The total number of passive verbs divided by the total number of finite verbs. RCm: A retained complement after a passive verb. RO/MC: The total number of run-ons divided by the total number of main clauses. Semi-Reduced Subordinate Clause: A Subordinate clause from which (usually) the subject and the auxiliary verb have been deleted. "When it is put through several other processes, it yields a chemical." --> "When put through several other processes...." SOPP: The percent of sentences that begin with a prepositional phrase. SOSC: The percent of sentences that begin with a subordinate clause. SOBut: The percent of sentences that begin with "But." SVAgr/FV: The total number of subject/verb agreement errors divided by the total number of finite verbs. Total W: The total number of words in the passage. TSC/MC: The total number of subordinate clauses divided by the number of main clauses. One hypothesis is that subordinate clauses develop before "advanced" constructions such as gerundives (participles) and appositives. Words: The total number of words in the student's revision. W/MC: The total number of words divided by the number of main clauses. This is the roughly equivalent of Hunt's "Words per T-Unit." (Hunt's "T-Unit" is a main clause defined as including all its subordinate clauses. See "Defining the 'T-Unit.'") W/SCL1: The total number of words in level one subordinate clauses, divided by the number of level one subordinate clauses. Theoretically, this number should grow before reductions to gerundives and appositives begin to blossom. W/Sent: Kellogg Hunt's research was fundamental
in establishing words per main clause as the basic yardstick of syntactic
maturity. His basic hypothesis was that young students create long sentences
by stringing main clauses together with "and." But when it comes to the
statistical analysis of students' writing, the primary problem is deciding
what counts as a "sentence." Obviously, two clearly compounded main clauses
count as one sentence -- "Bill went swimming, and Mary did the dishes."
But what if those two clauses are joined by a comma-splice? -- "Bill
went swimming, Mary did the dishes." Or are a run-on? -- "Bill went swimming
Mary did the dishes." Does a fragment count as a sentence? --"Because I
said so."
\-\ notes the beginning of a main clause (The hyphen implies that short-term memory is cleared of the preceding sentence.)The program counts total main causes by adding each of the above four codes. To count words per sentence, the total number of sentences is calculated by subtracting the number of fragments (\F\) from the above, and dividing the total number of words by the result. |
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