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Directions: Fix the spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors in the following.

My Porclain doll

When it was my birthday and I was turning eight. I got a porcelain doll from by 

Grandma. I hope I get to keep it for my hole life. That is how special it is to me. 

It is a ballet dancer. Her hair is braded. She has roseis in her head band. Her skirt

is pink. She has a rose on her white blaws. Her ballet shoes are pink. She has 

blue eyes. Her hair is blondish brown. Her lips are rosie pink. her skin is whiteish

peachish. She has beautifull pink bow on the edge of her sleeves. She makes 

beautifull music when you wind her up. She is the most beatifull thing I've ever