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Palimpsest Patterns
from Heidi by Johanna Spyri
Analysis Key

1. Further back the old grey rocks rose high (PA) and sheer (PA). |

"rose" written over "were"
2. Her cheeks were burning red (PA) | and she lay peacefully {on her round and

chubby arms}. |

"were burning" written over "were"
3. Just then Heidi came running in. |
"came" written over "was" At KISS Level Four (Verbals), students will learn an alternative explanation -- "running" is a gerund that functions as a noun used as an adverb.
4. {In this healthy life} Heidi grew stronger (PA), and more sunburnt (PA) every day [NuA] . |
"grew" written over "became"
5. The shutter {over there} [#1] is hanging loose (PA). |
"is hanging" written over "is"
6. But Miss Deta [DirA], the child seems peculiar (PA) {for her age}. |
"seems" written over "is"
7. The doctor was sitting motionless (PA). |
"was sitting" written over "is"
8. She appeared frightened (PA). |
"appeared" written over "was"
9. The next day dawned cloudless (PA) and fair (PA). |
"dawned" written over "was"
10. She has to sit quiet (PA) {at her lessons}. |
"to sit" written over "to be"
11. Heidi turned pale (PA) {at that comment}. |
"turned" written over "became"

Notes
1. "Over there" may raise questions. Alternatively, it can be explained as an adverb in an ellipsed adjectival subordinate clause -- "The shutter *that is* over there . . . ."