KISS Grammar Tense, Number, Logic, and Prepositional
Phrases
Based on Lessons in
English: Higher Course
Notes In addition to being an exercise on tense,
number, and prepositional phrases, this is a challenging exercise in what
writing teachers call "invention." Students will need to "invent" the details
of identity and extension in time and space. Weak writers often omit these
details, and this omission accounts for much of the weakness in their writing,
both in terms of details and in terms of main-clause length, a major yardstick
of syntactic maturity.
Examples of Possible Answers 1. The shiny swords {of the soldiers} [Adj. (identity) to "swords"] clashed {for hours} [Adv. (how long) to "clashed"] {in the bloody field} [Adv. (where) to "clashed"]. [Past, plural]
2. The yellow and gold leaves will fall {into the fields} [Adv. (where) to "will fall"] {in the windy days} [Adv. (when) to "will fall"] {of autumn} [Adj. (identity) to "days"]. [Future, plural]
3. {During the holidays} [Adv. (when) to "does buy"], does the typical man buy many (DO) {of his presents} [Adj. (identity) to "many"] {at the mall} [Adv. (where) to "does buy"] the
night [NuA] {before
Christmas} [Adj. (identity) to "night"]?
[Present, singular]
4. {In the spring} [Adv. (when) to "planted"] the farmer planted acres (DO) {of corn} [Adj. (identity) to "acres"] {in different parts} [Adv. (where) to "planted"] {of his fields} [Adj.
(identity) to "parts"]. [Past, singular]
5. {In early spring} [Adv. (when) to "babbles"] the boisterous, bubbling brook babbles {around the melting ice}
[Adv. (where) to "babbles"] {of
winter} [Adj. (identity) to "ice"].
6. Charitable doctors {without borders} [Adj. (identity) to "doctors"], {in the future} [Adv. (when) to "will save"], will save many more people (DO) {around the world} [Adv. (where) to "will save"]. [Future, plural] |