KISS Grammar Tense, Number, Logic, and Prepositional
Phrases
Based on Lessons in
English: Higher Course
Notes In addition to being an exercise on tense,
number, and prepositional phrases, this is a challenging exercise in what
writing teachers call "invention." Students will need to "invent" the details
of identity and extension in time and space. Weak writers often omit these
details, and this omission accounts for much of the weakness in their writing,
both in terms of details and in terms of main-clause length, a major yardstick
of syntactic maturity.
Examples of Possible Answers
1. The same bold
robbers stole
thousands (DO) {of
dollars} [Adj. (identity) to "thousands"] {in
New York} [Adv. (where) to "stole"] {over
several months} [Adv. (when) to "stole"].
[Past, plural]
2. {During Halloween} [Adv.
(when) to "will be clanking"], chains
will be clanking {throughout the
streets} [Adv. (where) to "will be clanking"]
{of many cities} [Adj. (identity)
to "streets"]. [Future, plural]
3. {During the Olympics} [Adv. (when) to "won"] an athlete {from the United States} [Adj. (identity) to "athlete"] won many medals (DO) {in the swimming competition} [Adv.
(where) to "won"]. [Past, singular]
4. {At the air show} [Adv. (where) to "will streak"], planes {from several countries} [Adj. (identity) to "planes"] will streak {across the blue sky} [Adv. (where) to "will streak"] {for hours} [Adv.
(how long) to "will streak"]. [Future,
plural]
5. {In the morning} [Adv. (when) to "comes" and "eats"], that bear comes {into our back yard} [Adv. (where) to "comes"] and eats the blackberries (DO) {on our bushes} [Adj.
(identity) to "blackberries"]. [Present,
singular]
6. The blue smoke {from the campfire} [Adj. (identity) to "smoke"] curls calmly {through the moonlit sky} [Adv. (where) to "curls"] {throughout the night} [Adv. (when) to "curls"]. [Present, singular] |