KISS Grammar Tense, Number, Logic, and Prepositional
Phrases
Based on Lessons in
English: Higher Course
Notes In addition to being an exercise on tense,
number, and prepositional phrases, this is a challenging exercise in what
writing teachers call "invention." Students will need to "invent" the details
of identity and extension in time and space. Weak writers often omit these
details, and this omission accounts for much of the weakness in their writing,
both in terms of details and in terms of main-clause length, a major yardstick
of syntactic maturity.
Examples of Possible Answers 1. Six hungry hawks were chasing a little bird (DO) {across a silken sky} [Adv. (where) to "were chasing"] {of blue} [Adj. (identity) to "sky"] {on a mild March morning} [Adv.
(when) to "were chasing"]. [Past,
plural]
2. The white sails {of the frigate} [Adj. (identity) to "sails"] were flapping {in the wind} [Adv. (where) to "were flapping"] {during the storm} [Adv. (when) to "were flapping"]. [Past, plural]
3. Will the human mind understand the meaning (DO) {of love} [Adj. (identity) to "meaning"] {in every corner} [Adv. (where) to "will understand"] {of the world} [Adj. (identity) to "corner"] {in the future} [Adv. (when) to "will understand"]? [Future, singular]
4. {Throughout their lives} [Adv. (when) to "hurts"], the evil {of men's hearts} [Adj. (identity) to "evil"] hurts themselves (DO) {in many different places} [Adv. (where) to "hurts"]. [Present, singular]
5. {For days and days} [Adv. (how long) to "howls"] the tempest howls {over the cold waves} [Adv. (where) to "howls"] {of the North Sea} [Adj. (identity) to "waves"]. [Present, singular]
6. {In the Senate} [Adv. (where) to "will discuss"], politicians {of both parties} [Adj. (identity) to "politicians"] will discuss the proposal (DO) {for many days} [Adv. (how long) to "will discuss"]. [Future, plural] |