Pennsylvania College of Technology 
Williamsport, PA		 ENL 111 (Vavra) 
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Exercise # 1 on Organization
 
     Directions: The following outline was submitted with a paper for Assignment #1. Study it. Then, in a sentence or two, explain what the major problem with it is. Then revise it, creating a new outline.  

 
I. Introduction & Thesis [Pagers are a necessity.] 
 
II. Business world 
    A. Stay in touch 
    B. Many coverager areas
III. Pager Services 
    A. Numeric pagers 
      1. 16 numbers 
      2. Few features
    B. Alpha-numeric pagers 
      1. Numbers and words 
      2. Multiple lines 
      3. Many features
IV. Hospitals 
    A. Doctors 
    B. In hospital paging
V. Teenagers 
    A. Teens always running around 
      1. Practice 
      2. Dates
    B. Easy for parents to reach
VI. Pager Features 
    A. Lots of colors 
    B. Different shapes and texture
VII. Conclusion