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Exercise # 2 on Organization

 
       Study the following thesis and outline. In two or three sentences, explain what is wrong with it. Then revise the outline. (You may also revise the thesis.)

I. Intro & Thesis: There are many risk factors that people should consider before they light up a cigarette.

II. Health Effects

    A. Affects on Athletes
    B. Lung Cancer
    C. Heart Attacks
III. Addiction
    A. Minors
    B. Attempting to Quit
IV. Second-Hand Smoke
    A. Restaurants
    B. Public Building
V. Closing