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Exercise # 3 on Organization

 
       Study the following thesis and outline. In two or three sentences, explain what is wrong with it. Then revise the outline. (You may also revise the thesis.)

I. Intro & Thesis: Should the United States continue economic and military aid to those countries or should we discontinue it?

II. Military Aid

    A. Continue military aid
    B. Results of continuing military aid
    C. Against continuing military aid
    D. Results of not continuing military aid
III. Economic Aid
    A. Continue economic aid
    B. Results of continuing economic aid
    C. Against continuing economic aid
    D. Results of not continuing economic aid
IV. Conclusion