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Williamsport, PA		 ENL 111 (Vavra) 
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Exercise # 4 on Organization

 
       Study the following thesis and outline. In two or three sentences, explain what is wrong with it. Then revise the outline. (You may also revise the thesis.)

I. Intro & Thesis: Lifeguarding is a very intense job, securing the safety of patrons and themselves.

II. Patron Safety

    A. Example of Rule
    B. Pool Environment Safe
III. Mentally Focused

IV. Physically Prepared

V. Example of physical and mental readiness

VI. Conclusion