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Spring 1998: MP # 3
A Set of Essays on Foils in Hamlet
Paper # 121     (G65 - 01)
 


 
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(1)     In many short stories and plays there are persons involved which [who] help characterize other main characters. This process of characterization is called a foil. [A foil is not a process.] "A foil is a minor character, who by similarities and differences, reveals characteristics of a more important character, and who, as an element of plot, is there for the more important character to talk to" (Vavra). The foils in William Shakespeare’s Hamlet, help the reader understand the main character; [, not ;] Hamlet.

(2)     Hamlet’s "excellent good friends", Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, are prime examples of a foil (Act 2, Scene 2 line 218). [Note] Claudius, the king, sent for them explicitly to find out what has been bothering him. [Ref - "him" here grammatically refers to Claudius, not to Hamlet.] When Rosencrantz and Guildenstern arrive in Denmark, Hamlet is aware that something is amiss. He begins to question them in a puzzling manner. Through Hamlet[']s questioning of them, we learn that Hamlet is very observant of suspicious behavior. This is seen again in Act 3, Scene 2 when Hamlet has the "players" perform a play of his father’s murder. Throughout the theatrical performance, Hamlet had no doubt that Claudius, his uncle, murdered his brother for the throne.

(3)     The realization of his father’s murder begins with the conversation he had with his father’s ghost. The ghost tells him to "revenge his foul and most unnatural murder"(Act 1, Scene 5 line 26). [Note]  Because of his father[']s murder[,] he begins to go insane. This insanity, or madness, increases during the play’s progression. The idea of madness is suggested later on in the play when Laertes learns of his father’s death. Laertes’s madness comes about suddenly, rather than gradually. The characters, Hamlet and Laertes, have other comparisons [similarities?] which help characterize Hamlet.
 

(4)    Laertes, brother of Ophelia, has a unique type [Can a "type" be "unique"?] of love, known only to brothers and sisters. He cares for his sister, and advises her to stay distant from Hamlet, because his love for her might be false. Hamlet has a strong love for her, but until the end of the play it is questionable, to both the reader and the other characters. When he sees that she has died, he states his love for her, "forty-thousand brothers could not with all their quantity of love make up my sum" (Act 5, Scene 1 lines 243-245). Laertes and Hamlet both have short tempers, which in turn pushes them toward imprudent actions. When conversing with his mother, Hamlet accidentally stabs and kills Polonius, the kings’ [king's] servant. Hamlet, acting on sudden anger along with his madness thought that it was Claudius whom he killed. "How now? A rat? Dead for a ducat. Dead!" (Act 3 Scene 4 line 25). [Why is the quotation relevant here?] This, in conjunction with Leartes drawing his sword upon Claudius when he hears of his father’s death, proves that he [Hamlet? or Laertes?] too does not realize his reckless behavior.

(5)     Hamlet’s encounter with the clown (gravedigger) [Similarities to show that the clown can be considered a foil?] reveals some subtitles [sic]  about his character. One of which is a fascination with death. [Frag -1] The gravedigger tosses up skulls and Hamlet contemplates on whom they once were. "This might be the pate of a politician"; "or of a courtier"; "why may not that be the skull of a lawyer" (Act 5 Scene 1 lines 68-86). When Hamlet holds the skull of Yorik, the dead kings’ [king's] jester, he finds himself thinking back to when he was a child. "He hath bore me on his back a thousand times, and now abhorred in my imagination it is" (Act 5, Scene 1 lines 162-164). After looking at the skulls, Hamlet says, "Is this the fine of his fines and the recovery of his recoveries, to have his fine pate full of fine dirt?" (Act 5 Scene 1 lines 92-94). This hints that Hamlet is pondering the thought of death’s worth. Does Hamlet start to question whether or not killing Claudius is meriting? The gravedigger also brings out happiness and cherished memories from within Hamlet. He revealed that Hamlet had a joyous life as a child, and was not always inflicted with this madness.

(6)     Throughout William Shakespeare’s Hamlet, [Titles] minor characters reveal the hidden characteristics of Hamlet. From his two friends, who exposed a cunningnous within him, to a gravedigger that was called a clown, the character of Hamlet was deciphered. Although Hamlet was going mad all through the play, he did "win" in the end. His character was sneaky, loving, psychotic, incestuous [evidence?] and even humorous at times. The importance of literary foils is apparent [in] all short stories and plays [You cannot generalize from one example, Hamlet, to "all."]; without them the main characters would be viewed, and characterized differently. The significance of the foils in Hamlet allows the reader to have a clearer understanding of the main character and theme behind the play.

 

Works Cited
 

Shakespeare, William. Hamlet as read in Barnet, S., Berman, M., Burto, W., Stubbs, M.  Literature for Composition, (1996) (pages 628-735) New York, NY: Harper Collins.
 
Vavra, E. Dr. – Definition of "literary foil" taken from class notes.
Spring semester, 1998
 


Outline
 
(1)
 
(2)
(3)
(4)
(5)
(6)
I. Foils in Hamlet 
    A. Rosencrantz & Guildenstern 
    B. His fathers ghost 
    C. Laertes 
    D. Gravedigger 
     
Dr. Vavra, 
     I have never liked writing outlines, nor do I think they are helpful. I realize that this will hurt my grade, but so be it. 

What a bad attitude, huh?

 
      Yes, I agree that it is a bad attitude. It is interesting that you do not think that they are helpful whereas I would consider the poor outline the cause of  your low grade. Without an outline, you apparently simply decided to write on the four sets of characters (A - D, above). Without the outline, your thesis simply states that the foils "help the reader understand the main character, Hamlet." You do not suggest, in the thesis, what the foils might suggest about Hamlet. In your second paragraph, you begin with a decent topic sentence -- "Rosencrantz and Guildenstern [...] are prime examples of a foil." You do not, however, even begin to suggest the similarities (or differences) between them and Hamlet. As a result, this paragraph in no way demonstrates that they are foils for Hamlet. If your outline had, as most students' did, "Similarities" and "Differences" listed under them, perhaps you would have stayed on track.
     The situation becomes worse in the third paragraph, where the topic sentence focuses more on the "realization of his father's murder" than it does on the ghost as a foil. As in the preceding one, you never discuss similarities and differences, and, instead of following the defnition of a foils as someone who "is there for the more important character to talk to," you note what the ghost tells Hamlet, not what Hamlet tells the ghost. I would not have been bothered in the least if you had expanded, or even challenged my definition of "foil," but you have simply ignored it. Most of your third paragraph is about Hamlet's madness, and not at all about foils. [By the way, if you wanted to focus on foils as emphasizing Hamlet's madness (an interesting idea), why didn't you discuss Polonius?)
     Your fourth and fifth paragraphs are not much better. The topic sentence of the fourth paragraph is about Laertes' love for his sister, not about his function as a foil. In the fifth, you state that the gravedigger "reveals some subtilties about his character," but the only one you mention is "a fascination with death." But the passages you cite do not appear to be as much about death as they are about "identity" -- "politician," "courtier," "lawyer," "jester."
    Could it be that your unwillingness to outline resulted in your paper going of target, whereas an outline might not only have kept you on, but also given you more details to discuss? Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are similar to Hamlet in age, in sex, and as students. They are also close to him in social status. But they are harmless, whereas Hamlet's madness results in him having them killed. Perhaps he does so because he is "mad" at them for no real reason? On the other hand, as foils, they are there for Hamlet to talk to, and his conversation with them in Act  3, Scene 2 suggests that Hamlet is not mad, but rather has his wits about him -- "Will you play upon this pipe?" Had I the time, I could suggest similarities and differences between Hamlet and the other characters you discussed, but I hope that, having been pointed in that direction, you will be able to see many of them for yourself. As your paper stands, any minor character in any work can be a foil -- See your conclusion. -- but that makes the term meaningless.
     I cannot, of course, force you to use outlines to organize and develop your thoughts, but I do suggest that you rethink the question.

 


ENL 121 (Vavra) Grading Sheet for MP3B (1 of 3) Foils in Hamlet (Revised 11/27/97)
Possible 
Points
Student's 
Grading
Instructor's 
Grading
Description Totals
Audience (20)
 13 / 16 
0 - 5  5  4 The essay has a good introductory paragraph.
0 - 5  0  3 The essay includes a brief definition (not in the introduction) of foils, such that a student who had not previously heard the term would understand both the concept and this essay.
0 - 5  4  5 The essay does not simply retell the play.
0 - 5
4 
 4 
The essay has a good concluding paragraph.
Thesis (20) 18 / 14
0 - 4  4  4 The thesis is recognizable, somewhere near the beginning of the essay.
0 - 4
 3 
 3 
The thesis and essay reflect good, independent thought about Hamlet. 
0 - 4  4  3 The thesis and essay reflect at least an average understanding of foils.
0 - 4  4  4 The essay reflects at least an average understanding of foils in Hamlet.
0 - 4  3  0 The essay reflects an above average understanding of foils in Hamlet
 Organization (20)
 13 / 11 
0 - 4
 3 
 3 
Topic sentences relate paragraphs to the thesis.
0 - 4
 4 
 4 
Paragraphs are generally eight to ten sentences long.
0 - 4
 2 
 2 
Major and minor points in the outline are logically arranged.
0 - 4
 0 
  
The essay is accompanied by a typed formal outline with subdivisions to the level of capital letters, i.e., II B. The paragraphs in the essay have been numbered and the numbers of the paragraphs have been placed in parentheses next to the corresponding part of the outline.
0 - 4
 4 
 0 
Paragraphs reflect subdivisions of major points. (For example, more than one paragraph is devoted to a single foil.)
2 of 3
Possible 
Points
Student's 
Grading
Instructor's 
Grading
Description Totals
Details (20) (Please fill in the blanks.) 
[Note: This rubric assumes that you will discuss at least two foils and be graded on the two you choose. You may discuss only one foil and use the same grades for both sections of this form.]
 12 / 8 
0 - 3
 3 
 2 
An explanation of similarities establsihes __Laerts____ as a foil to ______Hamlet__________.
0 - 3
  
 1 
The differences between foil #1 (above) and __Hamlet____ and their significance to the play are explained in detail.
0 - 3
 2 
 2 
The function of foil # 1 as a listener on stage (and its significance to the play) is explained in detail.
0 - 1
 1 
 0  
The relevance of foil # 1 to the thesis is explained in detail. 
0 - 3
 3 
 2 
An explanation of similarities establsihes ___R & G___ as a foil to ____Hamlet_.
0 - 3
 ? 
 1 
The differences between foil #2 (above) and __Hamlet___ and their significance to the play are explained in detail.
0 - 3
  
 0 
The function of foil # 2 as a listener on stage (and its significance to the play) is explained in detail.
0 - 1
 1 
 0 
The relevance of foil # 1 to the thesis is explained in detail.
(3 of 3)
Possible 
Points
Student's 
Grading
Instructor's 
Grading
Description Totals
Style (20)
 20 / 17 
0 - 3  3  2 Words are used correctly and accurately.
0 - 2  2  2 There are no (few) errors in usage.
0 - 2  2  2 Pronouns are used correctly.
0 - 2  2  2 Verb forms and tenses are used correctly.
0 - 3  3  3 All sentences are comprehensible.
0 - 2  2  1 Sentence structure is mature and varied.
0 - 3
 3 
 3 
There are no (few) sloppy errors. 
0 - 3
 3 
 2 
Punctuation marks are used correctly.
Minus Style Penalty Points (May be regained by correcting errors)
-2  
Basic Grade for the Essay (100)  76 / 64
Penalty Points: - __________ Late          -___________ Other -
Bonus points (6 possible)
+ 1
0 - 2
 
 
Brainstorming
0 - 2
 
  Outlining
0 - 2
 
 1
Revision
Final Grade for the Essay  76 / 65
Hostage Fifty:   
    apostrophe
N.B. If there is anything in the "Hostage Fifty" block, your grade is being held hostage at 50 until you earn its release. To learn how, look at the "Additional Major Paper Requirements."

Student's Comments: (You can also use the back of either page.)
 


Student's Log Codes: B = Brainstorming; RR = Reading/Research; O =Outlining; TC = Tutoring Center; D = Drafting; RV = Revising; E =Editing; G = Grading; T =Typing

NOTE: Revising = RV. Remember: use only one code per entry. (See Instructions.)
[Is it a question of can't read, or don't care? See comments below.]

I used a word-processor _____while drafting ___x__ while revising __x___ to type my paper.
 

Date: Code Started Stopped Minutes Comments
4-20
B
9:00
11:00
120
Jotted down some ideas
RR
12:00
1:00
60
Reread parts on which I "brainstormed"
4-19 [sic]
RR
?
?
120
Watched the movie w/ Mel Gibson just to get a "better pictyure" of certain parts. This was no help at all!
4-21
D
1:30
5:30
240
Wrote 3/4 of paper (maybe 5/8)
4-21
D
6:00
7:00
60
Finished the draft
4-21
T/RV
9:00
12::00
180
Typed it all & revised it [Grrr.]
 
Distribution of Time:
 
Process Minutes % of Total
Brainstorming
120 
15 
Read/Research
180 
23 
Outlining
Tutoring Center
Drafting
300 
38 
Revising
90 
12 
Editing
0 [?] 
Grading
Typing
90 
12 
Total
780 
= 13 hours