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Aesop's Fable # 3: The Buffoon and the Countryman
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      {At a country fair}there was a Buffoon (PN) who made all the people 

laugh#1 {by imitating the cries} {of various animals}He finished off {by squeaking}

so {like a pig} that the spectators thought that he had a porker (DO) concealed 

(about him}. But a Countryman who#2 stood by said: "Call that#3 a pig's

squeak!  Nothing#4 (like it}. You give me (IO) {till tomorrow} and I will show

you (IO)#5 what it's like#6." The audience laughed, but next day, sure enough,

the Countryman appeared {on the stage}, and putting his head down squealed so

hideously that thes pectators hissed and threw stones (DO) {at him} to make him

stop.  "You fools!" he cried, "see#7 what (DO of "have been hissing"#8) you

have been hissing," and held up a little pig (DO) whose ear (DO of "had been

pinching") he had been pinching to make him utter the squeals.

     Men often applaud an imitation (DO) and hiss the real thing (DO).
 

Gutenberg Project
Aesopa10.txt

Notes

1. Because "people laugh" is an infinitive (Level 4), the KISS Approach is to tell students that they are not expected to get the direct object of "made" right until they learn about infinitives.

2. Expect students to have a little trouble when they first meet a subject and verb between another subject and verb. (Some students will want to know if that is possible.)

3. If a student working at this level wanted to consider "that" as the direct object of "call," I would not object. (See Level 4.)

4. At this level, there are two ways of handling this. One is to ignore it and go on to the next sentence. The other is to push for the explanation through ellipsis -- "*It is* nothing like it." The latter leads to "Nothing" being the predicate noun after rgw ellipsed "It is."

5. Because they have not yet covered clauses, students are not expected to get the direct object of "show."

6. Here, "like" is a preposition, with the preceding "what" as its object. I would not expect students to get this until they were well into their work with clauses. At that point, they will see that the subordinate clause is "what it's like," which, rearranged, equals "it is like what."

7. See note # 5

8. Don't expect students to get this at this level.
 

Progress:
Total Words = 143 Words %
L1: In Prep Phrases  27  19
L1: + Adj & Adverbs + 24 36
+ L2: S / V / C + 58 76

From The KISS Approach to Grammar http://www.pct.edu/courses/evavra/KISS.htm