Notes for
THE SEA
Richard Henry Stoddard [1825-1903]
Forty-six of the seventy words in this poem
(66 %) are in prepositional phrases. Many of the phrases are repetitious,
but 66 % is still a remarkable figure. That and the fact that it appeared
in a children's book of verse were why I decided to use it, but as I was
preparing the analysis keys, I couldn't help but think of Diane Ravitch,
whose books I admire and whom I recently saw on "Book Notes." If I understand
her correctly, this poem would now have little chance of appearing in a
major textbook -- it gives an old-fashioned view of the roles of men and
women. I'm not an expert on children's literature, but I do have to wonder
what currently does appear. Do the currently acceptable works portray the
sacrifice and bravery of parents as well as this poem does? |