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A Passage for Analysis
From Charles Dickens' A Tale of Two Cities
Analysis Key

Note the parallel construction of the predicate adjectives "small," "dark," "ugly," and "incommodious," and then, parallel to that, their repetition as objects of prepositions.

     Tellson's Bank {by Temple Bar} was an old-fashioned place (PN),

even {in the year} one thousand seven hundred and eighty. [#1]  | It was

very small (PA), very dark (PA), very ugly (PA), very incommodious

(PA). |  It was an old-fashioned place (PN), moreover, {in the moral attribute} 

[Adj. to "attribute" that the partners {in the House} were proud (PA) 

{of its smallness}, proud (PA) {of its darkness}, proud (PA) {of its ugliness},

proud (PA) {of its incommodiousness}]. |  They were even boastful (PA)

{of its eminence} {in those particulars}, and were fired (P) {by an express

conviction} [Adj. to "conviction" that, [Adv. (condition) to "would be" if it 

were [#2] less objectionable (PA)], it would be less respectable 

(PA)]. | This was no passive belief (PN), but an active weapon (PN) 

[Adj. to "weapon" which [#3] they flashed {at more convenient places}

{of business}. |


Notes
1. "One thousand seven hundred and eighty" is an appositive to "year." See KISS Level 5.4 - Appositives.
2. Note that "were" here is a subjunctive--it is not a subject/verb agreement error. See KISS Level 2.1.7 - The KISS Perspective on the Subjunctive Mood.
3. "Which" is simultaneously a subordinating conjunction and the direct object of "flashed."