A Passage for Analysis
Note the parallel construction of the predicate adjectives "small," "dark," "ugly," and "incommodious," and then, parallel to that, their repetition as objects of prepositions. Tellson's Bank {by Temple Bar} was an old-fashioned place (PN), even {in the year} one thousand seven hundred and eighty. [#1] | It was very small (PA), very dark (PA), very ugly (PA), very incommodious (PA). | It was an old-fashioned place (PN), moreover, {in the moral attribute} [Adj. to "attribute" that the partners {in the House} were proud (PA) {of its smallness}, proud (PA) {of its darkness}, proud (PA) {of its ugliness}, proud (PA) {of its incommodiousness}]. | They were even boastful (PA) {of its eminence} {in those particulars}, and were fired (P) {by an express conviction} [Adj. to "conviction" that, [Adv. (condition) to "would be" if it were [#2] less objectionable (PA)], it would be less respectable (PA)]. | This was no passive belief (PN), but an active weapon (PN) [Adj. to "weapon" which [#3] they flashed {at more convenient places} {of business}. |
2. Note that "were" here is a subjunctive--it is not a subject/verb agreement error. See KISS Level 2.1.7 - The KISS Perspective on the Subjunctive Mood. 3. "Which" is simultaneously a subordinating conjunction and the direct object of "flashed." |