The Plays of Shakespeare
The following is a multi-class writing project
that I used when I was teaching remedial writing at the college level.
Obviously, you can adapt it any way you want to.
Day One. Introduction and the Assignment Shakespeare's
plays have been retold as short stories both by Elizabeth Nesbit and by
Mary and Charles Lamb. Each student in the class will be randomly
assigned one of the plays and be given free access to the version by Nesbit
and the version by the Lambs. Your assignment is to write a 500-750-word
comparison of the two versions of the story that is assigned to you.
In class -- Discussion
of the assignment and how to do it.
Day 2. In-class Essay Reread the two versions of your assigned tale. Make a list of the names of the major characters. In class you will write your own version of the tale, and you can use your list of characters (in-class essay) In class -- In-class
essay (counts as an in-class essay).
Day 3. -- Initial Storming Study the two versions, look for, and take notes on additional differences. Among others, consider, or do, the following: 1. Make a list of the major characters in each version. Are there differences in the amount of space (detail) used to develop specific characters? Make a table to create a list of characteristics of the major characters in each version and of the way in which they are developed. For example:Note that the preceding are only suggestions, but they are aimed at getting you to look at the two versions in detail so that you will have specific things to say in your paper. In class -- Small
group discussions of the results of your storming
Day 4. More Storming, Tentative Thesis and Outlines Based on the results of the in-class discussions for Day Three, add to your storming. Then look for a thesis for your paper. What single, major point do you want to make about the differences between the two versions? What items in your storming best support that point? Then write a brief tentative outline. I am expecting a point-by-point outline that looks something like the following. I. Introduction and Thesis (Write out your tentative thesis statement).The specifics of the Roman numbers in the body of your outline should obviously be based on your choice of points of comparison. If you wish, you can have a third section in the body of your outline, but that may mean that you did not find enough details to support just two sections. (In other words, your paper will be weaker.) Bring your storming and two copies of your tentative thesis and outline to class. In class -- Small
group discussions of your thesis, outline, and storming.
Day 5. Draft of the first difference Based on the input you received in the preceding class, type a draft of the difference. Note that you can have one paragraph for each Roman number in your outline, or you can have, for example, two paragraphs on one or more major points. Thus, for example, you might have one paragraph on the characterization in the Lambs' version followed by a second paragraph on the characterization in Nesbit's version. Bring two copies of this draft to class. In class -- Small
group discussions of drafts
Day 6. Draft of the second difference Write a draft of the second difference. Bring two copies of this draft to class. In class -- Small
group discussions of drafts
Day 7. Introduction, Outline, Thesis, & Conclusion Review your thesis and outline. Then write a draft of an introduction and conclusion. Bring two copies of your thesis, outline, introduction and conclusion to class. In class -- Small
group discussions of work thus far.
Day 8. Revision & Editing Workshop Revise and edit your draft. In class -- Peer review of revisions and editing..
Day 9. The final paper is due. |