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Aesops' Fable # 4: The Lion in Love
Answer Key for Level 3
     Subordinate clauses are in brackets [ ]. / represents the vertical line at the end of a main clause.  The font size of words aleady analyzed has been decreased. The color codes for adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases have been deleted because too many colors seemed distracting. Words which remain to be analyzed are still in 14-point black

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      A Lion once fell {in love}{with a beautiful maiden} and

proposed marriage {to her parents}. /  The old people did

not know what to say. /  They did not like to give their

daughter {to the Lion}, /  yetNote #1 they did not wish to 

enrage the King{of Beasts}. /  {At last} the father said:Note #2

[(DO of "said") "We feel highly honoured {by your Majesty's 

proposal},] but [(DO of "said") you see [(DO of "see")  our

daughter is a tender young thing,]] and[(DO of "said") we 

fear [(DO of "fear") that {in the vehemence} {of your affection}

you might possibly do her some injury.]] /  Might I venture

to suggest [(DO of "suggest") that your Majesty should 

have[CNE] your claws removed, and your teeth extracted],

/ Note #3 then we would gladly consider your proposal again." / 

The Lion was so much {in love} [(Adverbial to "so") that he 

had[CNE] his claws trimmed and his big teeth taken out.] / 

ButNote  [(Adverbial to "laughed" and "bade") when he came

again {to the parents} {of the young girl}] they simply laughed {in

his face}, and bade him do his worst. /

     Love can tame the wildest. /
 

Gutenberg Project
Aesopa10.txt

Notes:

1. "Yet" means "but." Some people will argue that "yet" is a "conjunctive adverb and not a coordinating conjunction. As a result, they would probably want a semicolon (and not just a comma) to precede it; others will claim that the two main clauses are short enough to be joined with a comma anyway. Whatever you do, don't spend too much time on it.

2. Because of the semicolon after "said," you could argue that the three clauses which I have labelled as direct objects are main clauses. Either option should be considered as correct.

3. I have counted this as a main clause break and a comma splice (the joining of two main clauses with only a comma. Note that this clause would be the direct object of "suggest," if there were an "if" in front of "your Majesty."
 
 

Progress
Total Words = 160 Words %
L1: In Prep Phrases  38  24
L1: + Adj & Adverbs 35 46
+ L2: S / V / C 65 86
+ L3: Clauses 8 91

 
Some Basic Statistics on Style
# of Sentences: 8 Words per: 20.0
# of Main Clauses: 10 Words per 16.0
# of Sub Clauses: 8 SC / MC .80

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