There
are
five
people
{in
my family} my mom (Appositive
to
"people") ,
my
dad (Appositive
to "people") and
my two
brothers
(Appositive to "people") /
their
names
are
Ray
and
Paul. /
I
live
{at 328 Sandy Dr.} /
First I
think
[I
will start
{with
my
dad.}]
/
My dad works
{at Optimal Arts.} /
He
travels
pretty
much. /
He goes all
Note # 1{over the place} asking
{for money} {for his
company.} /
My
dad's name
is
Bill.
/
I
will talk {about
my mom.} /
Well
(Interjection) she
is
pretty
tall
/
and
she
is also
pretty./
Everyday she
stays
home (NuA
to "stays") and
watches
my
brother{except
[when
he
goes
{to preschool.}])
/
My
mom's name is
Sarah.
/
I
will
talk {about my big brother.} /
He
likes
to play
golf a
lot (NuA
to "likes" or "play"). /
His
best
is an
eighty-two
{on
eighteen holes}{from the men's tee's.}/
And
that
is good
{from
the
men's tee's.} /
My
brother
is
13
/
His
name
is
Ray.
/ Now
my little
brother Paul
(Appositive to "brother"). /
He can
be a really
pain
sometimes. /
Like Note #2
[when
I
am talking
{on the phone}and
sitting {on
the sofa}] he
starts
jumping {on
the sofa} /
and
I start
bouncing up
and down. /
But
I like
him
a lot (NuA
to "like"). /
He is
three
years (NuA
to "old") old.
/ His
name
is
Paul.
/
I
will
talk {about myself.}
/
Well (Interjection)
I like playing
golf also.
/
My best score
{on eighteen holes} is
an
eighty-six
{from
the
ladie's tee's.}/
That is
really good
{for me.} /
My best {from
the men's
tee's}{on nine holes} is
a forty-six
{on the hardest nine.} /
I
am nine
years (NuA
to "old")
old.
/
I
will
talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.}
/
Well
(Interjection)
he is
a
four legged creature /
He is
a dog.
/
He
has
brown and black fur.
/ I
like him a
lot (NuA
to "like").
/
He is
eleven years
(NuA to "old")
old. /
Yesterday
was
his birthday.
/
My
house
is
mosty
made
{of bricks} /
and
the other part
is made {out
of something else} / I
don't
know [what
it is]
though.
Note #3 /
I live
{at
423 Sandy Drive.} / My
house
is
pretty
big.
/ We
have a big
back yard. /
I
have the
biggest bedroom
{in
the house} {out
of five rooms.} /
Our basement is
big. /
We
have
a pinball
machine
and a big ping-pong
table. /
Most
(NuA to "stay")
{of the time} I
stay
downstairs.
/ [Because
it is
cool
{down there.}] /
[After
I
come
in [when
it
is
hot outside]]
I
go down {in
the basement.} /
Then I
get
cold [so
I go upstairs.]
/
My brother's
room
isthe
second biggest
{in
the house.} /
My parent's room
is
{down
the hall} [when you
walk
in.]
/ My
little brothers room
is{in
the hall} also. /
So is the
bathroom.
/
We
have a
living room and
a family room and
a
kitchen.
/
Well
(Interjection)
that
is all
{about my house.}
/
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