Words = 103
IU = 27
W/MC = 9.4
TSC/MC = .45
W/SCL1 = 5.6
L2+SC/MC = 0
List of Students' Versions
Syntactic Structure
Student 004
IU's Original
% W in PP = 21

Passive F Verbs = 2

Compounds
MC= 1
     Frag = 0
     CS = 1
     RO = 0
Subjects = 0
F Verbs = 0
Complements = 2

Sub Clauses
     Level 1 = 5
     Level 2 = 0
     Level 3 = 0

      \-\Aluminum is an abundant metal [RAJFthat comes {from bauxite.}] \-\Bauxite is an ore [RAJFthat looks like clay,] [RAJFwhichNote #1 contains aluminum and several other=CM substances.]\-\Workmen extract these other substances {by grinding*GerOP04 the bauxite} {and then putting*GerOP06 them} {in tanks.} \-\The tanks are pressurized=PV [RAVFso that the other substances form a mass.] \-\To remove*INFAV04 the mass they use filters, \,\Note #2 A liquid will remain \C\and they'll put it {through several other processes.}\-\Finally, a white powdery chemical yields. \-\This mixture is called=PValumina,#RCM01[RAJFwhich contains aluminum and oxygen.=CC]\-\The workmen then separate the aluminum {from the oxygen} {by using*GerOP02 electricity.} \-\This finally produces the metal.
Types of Noun Clauses Types of Adjective Clauses
L-DO   M-DO   R-DO   L-Full   M-Full   R-Full  4
L-PN   M-PN   R-PN   L-Red   M-Red   R-Red  
L-OP   M-OP   R-OP   Types of Adverbial Clauses
L-DS   M-DS   R-DS   L-Full   M-Full   R-Full  1
L-SU   M-SU   R-SU   L-Red   M-Red   R-Red  
L-AP   M-AP   R-AP   Interjections as Clauses
Left   Mid   Right  
A note on Left, Mid, and Right Branching
Infinitives Other
Type No. Words Type No. Words Type No. Words
Dir Obj     DO Ell     NuA    
Pred N     Obj Prep     Inj    
Subject     Del Sub     RCm  1  1
Appositive     Interj     App    
Adjective     Adverb  1  4 Dr A    
Gerunds D Subj    
Dir Obj     Pred N     PPA    
Obj Prep  3  12 Subject     Noun Absolutes
Del Sub     Appositive     Adv    
Interj     Subj    
Gerundives (Participles) Dir Obj    
Left     Mid     Obj Prep    
Right     Pred N    

1. This clause is awkward because the "which" goes all the way back to "ore." Would most people recognize clay "which contains aluminum and several other substances"?

2. This is a half-splice. The comma definitely looks more like the other commas in the text, but the "A" is also definitely capitalized.