A. Leonard
ENG 121-04
March 3, 2000
Major Paper #1
The Tranquility of Innocence
1) In “For Esme- With Love and Squalor,”
J.D. Salinger addresses a part of every person’s life. Everyone experiences
periods in their life when they question the world and what is happening
around them. Most people probably do not experience it quite as dramatic
as the writer of the story, Sergeant X, does. He finds himself in
the middle of the pure madness of war, and is having a hard time coping
with the realities of the situation. Eventually, people find their
way of dealing with these moments. Sergeant X relies on his memories
of Esme to help him. The theme of the story is that the innocence
of youth can serve as a healing power in times when the world seems to
be falling apart.
2) “For Esme-With Love and Squalor” is
essentially a story within a story; this is important to the theme of the
story because the writer attempts to remove himself from the story (in
first person narration) for the purpose of examination (in third person).
This use of point of view makes the reader wonder what is “real” and what
the author (inside the story) is “making-up.” This sounds strange
because the whole story is fictitious, but Salinger makes us contemplate
this and it adds to the effect of the story.
3) The first part of the story is told
from first person narration. We are told the reason for writing is
“…to edify, to instruct…” the man that Esme is about to marry. Throughout
the first half of the story we are given the impression that the writer
is admiring Esme for her youth and innocence, or love as the title suggests.
Before the change to third person narration, we are told that this is going
to be the squalid or repulsive part of the story. The writer then
“disguises” himself as Staff Sergeant X. Even though the point of
view changes, we are still able to read what is going through Sergeant
X’s mind. We experience the pain and suffering that he endures.
We are also able to understand how Esme’s innocence is able to end that
suffering.
4) The main characters in the story help
to illustrate the theme by contrasting the two different “worlds” in the
story. Esme, although she only knows the writer for a short time,
has a profound impact on him. Esme is intelligent, but it is obvious that
she is trying much too hard to impress the author. Her dramatic vocabulary
and over use of the word “extremely” is childish and annoying. During the
choir practice the coach says that children should “…absorb the meanings
of the words they sing, not just mouth them, like silly billy parrots.”
5) However, it is not the intelligence
she displays, it is her innocence and child-like appearance that the writer
concentrates on the most. We are told before she approaches that she is
giving “qualified smiles”, or appearing sexually mature. The way he describes
her crossed ankles and feet as being lovely, further supports the characteristics
of her being naïve and not sexually alluring. The author also
notes Esme’s lack of compassion, this also adds to the idea of her as being
innocent and unaware of the realities of war. She describes her father
as being “S-L-A-I-N.” This is later used at the end of the story
to mock Esme’s naïve remark that he returns from the war with all
his “faculties intact.”
6) The character of Corporal Z helps
to support the theme of the story by contrasting Esme and depicting the
world that surrounded Sergeant X in the second part of the story. Corporal
Z is looked upon as being an unintelligent person. The vulgarity
that he uses shows that, unlike Esme, he has a very limited vocabulary.
He also seeks Sergeant X’s assistance in letters he writes to his girlfriend.
Corporal Z is portrayed to be a truly uncompassionate person, unlike Esme
who is just naïve. He claims to be a war hero, the writer points
out, by wearing a Combat Infantryman’s Badge, “…which, technically, he
wasn’t authorized to wear.” He is told by Sergeant X not to step
on the dog when he enters the room. This is symbolic of Corporal
Z’s uncompassionate character. A “dog” or “dog face” was a common
named used to refer to an infantry soldier in World War II. By wearing
the badge he does “step-on”, or disgrace, the soldiers because he is unaware
of what they had to endure in the war.
7) The symbolism of the watch is crucial
to the understanding of the story’s theme. We are first told of a watch
that Esme is wearing at the beginning of the story. Later in the story
the watch reappears, it is clearly a symbol of Esme’s innocence.
In the letter, which accompanies the watch, she writes that it is “shock-proof”
and would serve “… as a lucky talisman…” for the writer. We are told
by Corporal Z that Sergeant X is suffering from a nervous breakdown, or
shell shock, from the war. The fact that the watch was shockproof
and its crystal was broken makes Sergeant X ponder if “…the watch was otherwise
undamaged.” The watch, like himself, had received a shock.
By winding the watch and finding it didn’t work he would have lost all
faith in Esme’s innocence. Instead, he held the watch, her
innocence, for a long period of time. It was her innocence
and love that helped him out of this traumatic and squalid period of his
life.
8) Innocence in a world of death, tyranny,
and oppression seems ridiculous. The world has a way of destroying
and making one numb to the ideals and values we once held in our youth.
In Stephen Crane’s novel “The Red Badge of Courage,” we are told a story
of a young man’s journey into manhood in the backdrop of the Civil War.
Henry, as did Sergeant X, had a difficult time coming to terms with the
realities of war. Sergeant X dwelled upon his experiences and allowed
them to haunt him. We are told at the end of “The Red Badge of
Courage” that Henry is able to “…rid himself of the red sickness of battle.”
Crane writes that he turns “… with a lover’s thirst to images of tranquil
skies, fresh meadows, (and) cool brooks.” In “For Esme- With Love
and Squalor,” Sergeant X turns to the tranquil memories of innocence triggered
by Esme.
Paragraph Outline
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I.Introduction and Thesis: The innocence of youth can serve as a healing
power in times when the world seems to be falling apart. |
2) |
II. Point of View (Story with in a story) |
3) |
A . First Person
B. Third Person
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4) |
III. Characterization |
5) |
A. Esme
1. Intelligent (trying too hard)
2. Not sexually alluring (naïve)
3. Uncompassionate
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6) |
B. Corporal Z
1. Unintelligent (unlike Esme)
2. Uncompassionate
a. Claims to a hero (C.I.B)
b. “Dog”
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7) |
IV. Symbolism
A. Watch
1. “Shockproof”
2. Broken Crystal
B. SSG X
1. Shell shock
2. Watch = Innocence
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8) |
V. Conclusion: Tranquility of Innocence |
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