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Record Number: W4N03
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     I have double-spaced the text so that teachers can simply print it out and use it for exercises or for their own analysis.

      The worst Day of my life is When I had a birthday and 

My Sister seemed to be the birthday girl. I know this isn't very

bad but I can't think of anything that was worst now I will 

finish my story. So me and my friend Went upstairs and put

together my present that I got from dad  My dad and mom 

helped me put together my present.  After everybody went

home I was mad at my sister but I got over it  My house is

brick at the bottom and yellow at the top  We live at 1302 

Wxxxxxx Ave.  My house has two floors.  We have a hill 

around my house. We have two living rooms, three bedrooms, 

two bathrooms, and a kitchen. We have eight rooms in our

house We have two t.v in my house.  I like my house very 

much.