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The 1986 Study

Notes for the Analysis (& Teaching)
of Fourth Graders' Writing
      This document contains noted which are linked to from the various essays studied in this section.
Adjectives - Counting and Teaching of

     I would not expect students to identify predicate adjectives (or post-positioned adjectives) until those specific constructions are studied. In this section, therefore, they are left unexplained and uncounted.

Apostrophes for Contractions of Verbs

     Having suggested, in the discussion of Possessive Nouns, that the apostrophe in them might be taught to second graders, I would here suggest that the apostrophe in contractions of verbs should not be formally taught before fourth grade -- when, in the KISS Approach, students would begin to study S/V/C patterns. When an apostrophe is used incorrectly in the writing of second or third graders, I would correct it, but not explain it unless a student asked for an explanation. In that case, I would say something such as "'It's' means 'it is, so we put in an apostrophe to stand for the letters that have been left out."
     Of course, when they get to fourth grade, the situation changes -- the students, in identifying S/V/C patterns, will have to learn to identify the subjects and verbs in such contractions.

Possessive Nouns

     In W4N01, the student referred to "my mom and dads room." The phrase, of course, should be "my mom and dad's room" (or "my mom's and dad's room"). As I write this (12/27/99), I'm wondering if second graders could be usefully  taught to identify nouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, -- and possessive nouns. I would not expect second graders to master these concepts, but some formal instruction and simple exercises could provide a useful background for correcting apostrophe errors from second grade on.
     Possessive nouns function as adjectives, but they themselves are modified by adjectives. This is the same principle that we see in verbals, which are modified by adverbs but which may function as nouns. In "Eating fast is not good for your health." "fast" is an adverb modifying "eating," a gerund which functions as the subject of "is."

Subjects and Verbs

     I don't see any reason for teaching third grade students to identify subjects and verbs. When, in writing, students make a mistake, teachers can simply note it with a checkmark or orally help the student fix it. For example, in W4N01, the student wrote: "I'll tell you about my brothers room. It is cream color walls, and brown carpet." Orally, I would ask the student, "It IS cream colored walls?" If the student did not catch the clue in my emphasis, I would go on to ask, "It is?" or "It has?" I would treat errors in agreement the same way. The same student wrote, "My mom and dads room have cream walls and green carpet." Note that the error is probably caused by interference from "mom and dads" -- both the combined plurality and the problem of the apostrophe. So I would simply ask, "The room HAVE cream walls?" 
     Once they are in fourth grade and have begun to study S/V/C patterns, the teacher's approach should change. In the "It is cream color walls" example, I would ask the student to identify the S/V/C pattern. If the student had trouble, I would ask for the verb, then the subject, and then the complement -- and its type. In the process of giving me these, the student might well see and fix the error, but if he did not, I would then ask if the room equals the cream colored walls. Once the student sees that it does not, I would ask the student how he might say what he meant. The odds are that this would lead to his replacing "is" with "has."
    In the "My mom and dads room have cream walls and green carpet" example, I would again begin by asking the student to identify the S/V/C pattern, if necessary helping by asking for the verb first. Once they see the pattern, most students correct subject-verb agreement errors such as this all on their own. If the student did not, I would ask, "The room HAVE?" [We need to remember that all children have, all on their own, mastered the basics of subject-verb agreement before they get to school. They have, in other words, basic competence. Their performance errors usually result from some type of interference (such as that noted above). The KISS approach enables students to break sentences down, thereby eliminating much of the interference.]