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The 1986 Study

Record Number: W4N05

Level 2: 
Add Subjects, Finite Verbs, & Complements

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     The worst day I had {in my life}was yesterday (PN)

9/25/86. {On the tire} yesterday, I brused my behind (DO). Now

it hurts. Plus, I almost cracked my head (DO) {on the top pole.}

The next thing that happened yesterday was Note #1 the V.C.R.

wouldn't record a show (DO) I wanted to watch. Then the

most worst thing my cat got out and went {in the ceuar.}Then he

jumped {in another tunnel} {in the ceuar.}Finally when we left he

came out. I thought Note #1 he would fall {in the deep, deep,

hole} Then I had to take care Note #2{of Mack.} Boyy!! Was

he heavy (PA) Then I had homework (DO). I was pooped

(PA) Note #3 {at the end} {of the day!}

     Yesterday, I was left {in the car} {with my baby brother.} When 

we were {in the car} it was raining, thundering, and

lightning. As soon as Mark finished his bottle (DO), he was 

scared {to death.} I was scared, too. I told myself (IO) Note #1

"If dad doesn't come now, I'm going in {with Mark."} So I did

When I was {out of the car,} here comes my dad

Whoo! I thought Note #1 we were going to get hurt (PA)

Note #4. But we didn't.

     What is your favorite gem (PN)? I had a great time (DO)

yesterday. There's this hill (PN) {next to my driveway,} and when 

you go {down it} {on your bike,} it's {like a roller coaster!} {During

the summer} I had to go {to playcamp} One day {at playcamp,} we

went {to Kings Dominion.} We got there {by a Blue Bird Bus.}

When we got there we split {into four groups.} My group people

were Diane (PN), Tereasa (PN), Matthew (PN), and me

(PN) Note #5. First we went {on Smurf Mountain Roller Coaster!} I

sat {with my best friend Tereasa} Boy! Was that fun (PA)! Then

we went {on the Diamond Falls Ride!} We went up, up, up, and we

turned and went {down the slide,} and Splash! I was soaked

Then we went {in the Troll Mines.} I didn't look because I was 

afraid Note #6 something would pop out {in front of me.} Then

we went {on the swings, Scooby-Doo, Fairis Wheel,} played a

game (DO), climbed a net (DO) and when we got {to the top}

Tereasa and I went{down the giant tube slide,} we were going 

to go {on White Water Canion} but it was closed. Then we got

some lunch (DO). Then we played one more game (DO), and I

won a Giant Pink Dog (DO) Note #7 I'll bring him (DO) one

day, just tell me (IO) when (DO)

Yesterday, my mom went to start Note #8 a fire, and when she

opened it (DO), there was a big mouse (PN)! You see we

have a cat (DO) and each time he comes in, we think he

brings in a mouse (DO) or something (DO) and stores it 

(DO) somewhere.
 

Notes

1. Don't expect students to be able to identify clauses as complements. That will come in Level Three.

2. I would accept "had to take care" as an idiomatic verb. Some people prefer to view "had to take" as the verb, and "care" as the direct object. Still others will want to see "had to take care of" as the verb (meaning either "watch" or "help") and "Mack" as the direct object. Since grammarians and linguists can't agree on a single interpretation, I consider it unethical to try to force one on students.

3. If students are being taught the difference between active and passive verbs, this can be a very humorous sentence to work with. It is definitely an idiomatic predicate adjective, and not a passive. :)

4. I wouldn't waste time arguing with a student who wants to consider "hurt" as part of the verb.

5. Some would argue, as a question of usage, that "me" should be "I." In formal usage, this probably is still true, and I might, depending on the students, point this out, but general practice accepts "me."

6. At this level, I would accept "afraid" as a predicate adjective. Idiomatically, however, it functions as part of the verb because it has a clause as a complement. (This is still another case in which grammarians can argue forever, but the point in question has no relevance to how well students use the language. Don't waste time on it.)

7. "Giant" and "Pink" are, of course, adjectives. Because they were capitalized, as if in a name, I left them uncounted until now.

8. At this level, I would accept "went to start" as the finite verb.
 
 

Progress:
Total Words = 449 Words %
L1: In Prep Phrases  124  28
L1A: + Adj. & Averbs 72 44
L2: + S / V / C 217 92

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