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Aesops' Fable # 5: The Lion and the Mouse
Answer Key for Level 3
     Subordinate clauses are in brackets [ ]. / represents the vertical line at the end of a main clause.  The font size of words aleady analyzed has been decreased. The color codes for adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases have been deleted because too many colors seemed distracting. Words which remain to be analyzed are still in 14-point black

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        Once [(Adverbial to "once") Note #1 when a Lion was asleep]

a little Mouse began running up and down {upon him}; / Note 2

this soon wakened the Lion, [(Adjective to "Lion") who

placed his huge paw {upon him}, and opened his big jaws

to swallow him]. "Pardon, O King," cried[CNE] the little

Mouse: / Note # 3  "forgive me this time,  / Note #4  I shall

never forget it: / who knows [(DO of  "knows")  but what

Note #5  I may be able to do you a turn some {of these 

days}?"] / The Lion was so tickled {at the idea} {of the Mouse}

being able to help him, [(Adverbial to "so") that he lifted up his

paw and let[CNE] him go.] /  Some time {after}Note #6 the

Lion was caught {in a trap},  and the hunters [(Adjective 

to "hunters")  who desired to carry him alive {to the King},]

tied him {to a tree} [(Adverbial to "tied") while they went

{in search} {of a waggon} to carry him {on}.] / Just then the little

Mouse happened to pass {by}, and seeing the sad plight 

[(Adjective to "plight") {in which} the Lion was,] went up {to him}

and soon gnawed away the ropes [(Adjective to "ropes")  that 

bound the King {of the Beasts}.] / [(DO of  "said") "Was I not

right?"] said the little Mouse. /

      Little friends may prove great friends. /
 

Gutenberg Project
Aesopa10.txt

Notes:

1. The brain probably chunks this cluase to "once," thereby creating one chunk, instead of two, in STM. (See our psycholinguistic model of reading.) However, if you chunked it as an adverb to "began running," count your answer as also correct.

2. Although this semicolon does separate main clauses, I don't see any contrast between the ideas expressed in them. I note this to suggest that many of our "rules" are simply norms -- which I would enforce upon students with caution. See semicolons.

3. You could consider "cried the little mouse" as a subordinate clause functioning as an intejection within "Pardon, O King, forgive me this time."

4. Technically, this is a comma-splice, but the main clauses are short.

5. I will guarantee that you will get at least five different answers from a dozen different grammarians in explanation of this "but what." If students are struggling to master clauses, this is not worth spending time on. I would slide right over it unless someone specifically asked about it. In that case, the "but" may be explained through ellipsis -- "who knows *anything* but what I may be able ...." I would then consider the "but" as a preposition (It means "except."), and the clause as the object of the preposition. This still leaves a problem with "what," which, in terms of my explanation, should be "that." I have a sense, however, that  "who knows but what," which means "perhaps," is what Roy O'Donnell would have considered a "formula," -- a series of words learned as a whole without regard to its inner syntactic structure. As I stated above, this type of question can take a lot of time, and a lot of research.

6. I'm wondering how many readers are momentarily confused by this "after." I first read it as a subordinate conjunction ["after the Lion was caught in a trap ..."] I then hit the "and," crashed, and had to reprocess the sentence. The problem would not occur if there were a "that" after "after": "Some time after that the Lion was caught in a trap, and ...."
 
 

Progress
Total Words = 184 Words %
L1: In Prep Phrases  37  20
L1: + Adj & Adverbs 43 43
+ L2: S / V / C 73 83
+ L3: Clauses 6 86

 
Some Basic Statistics on Style
# of Sentences: 8 Words per: 23.0
# of Main Clauses: 12 Words per 15.3
# of Sub Clauses: 9 SC / MC .75

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