My
saddest day
[I
ever had]
is [when
My dog
got
hit {by a
car.}]
/ It
happened
[when
I was
playing
ball.]
/ It
was{at night}
[when
Fracles got hit.]
/ Fracles broke
lose, and ran
down to
go (Inf.,
adverb to "ran")
{to the apple trees.} /And
he got hit
[when he
was
crossing the
road.]
/ And
[whoevery
hit Fracles]
did not
stop.
/
And then a
man saw him
laying
(Gerundive to "him" Note #1)
{by the road.} /
He saw
my
("me") playing
(Gerundive to
"me") ball
(D.O. of "playing") and yelled
up {to my}and
said [is
this your
dog.]
/ And
I ran
{down the driveway} /
and
I
said
Yes. /
And I told
dad. /
And I
was crying. /
I
feel good
today. /
But my
arms don't
feel too
well. / You
see
I
fell {out
of the tree} last night. /
My foot
sliped /
and I
fell. /
It
didn't feel
very
good. /
But I
didn't
cry. /
But [when
I had
the car
wrick]
I didn't
cry ether. /
I
feel good
today. /
But my
eye hurts.
/ I
can't
see very well. /
I was {at
the brandi's} / and
my eye
was getting pinked. /
And
{in
the morning} [when
I
woke
up] it
got stuck. /
I had
to pull it
open
Note #2. /
My
best friend is
Stephany. /
I don't
[k]now why /
but I
just
like to
play (Inf., D.O. of "like")
{with her.} /
Will
see I
liked
[her - EV] every {sinse third grade.} /
I just
think
[she
is fun
to
play with
(Inf., adverb to "fun" Note #3).]
/ [Like
I
said
before!]
/
The
goodest day
[I
every had]
was [when
I came
{to Xxxxxxxx
Xxxxxxx}]
/ I like
this school
very much. /
It is
a good school.
/ I
like my teacher
the best /
she is
very nice
and pretty and
slim very
pretty and SLIM! /
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