and my two brothers their names are Ray (PN) and Paul

(PN).  I live {at 328 Sandy Dr.} First I think ^{Note #1} I will start

{with my dad.} My dad works {at Optimal Arts.} He travels

pretty much. He goes all {over the place} asking {for money} {for 

his company.}My dad's name is Bill (PN). I will talk {about my

mom.} Well she is pretty tall (PA) and she is also pretty (PA). 

Everyday she stays home and watches my brother (DO)

{except when he goes {to preschool.}} My mom's name is

Sarah (PN). I will talk {about my big brother.}He likes to play 

golf a lot. His best ^{Note #2} is an eighty-two (PN) {on eighteen

holes} {from the men's tee's.}And that is good (PA) {from the 

men's tee's.} My brother is 13 (PA) His name is Ray (PN). 

Now my little brother Paul. He can be a really pain (PN)

sometimes. Like when I am talking {on the phone}and sitting

{on the sofa} he starts jumping {on the sofa} and I start

bouncing up and down. But I like him (DO) a lot. He is three

years old (PA). His name is Paul (PN).

     I will talk {about myself.}  Well I like playing golf ^{Note #4}

also. My best score {on eighteen holes} is an eighty-six (PN)

{from the ladie's tee's.} That is really good (PA) {for me.} My best

{from the men's tee's}{on nine holes} is a forty-six (PN) {on the

hardest nine.} I am nine years old (PA). 

     I will talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.} Well he is a 

four legged creature (PN) He is a dog (PN). He has brown and

black fur (DO). I like him (DO) a lot.  He is eleven years old

(PA). Yesterday was his birthday (PN). 

     My house is mosty made {of bricks} and the other part

is made {out of something else} I don't know ^{Note #1} what (PN)

it is though. I live {at 423 Sandy Drive.} My house is pretty big

(PA). We have a big back yard (DO). I have the biggest

bedroom (DO) {in the house} {out of five rooms.}Our basement

is big (PA). We have a pinball machine (DO) and a big 

ping-pong table (DO). Most {of the time} I stay downstairs. 

Because it is cool (PA) {down there.} After I come in when it

is hot (PA) outside I go down {in the basement.}Then I get cold

(PA ^{Note #5}) so I go upstairs. My brother's room is the second

biggest (PA ^{Note #6}) {in the house.}My parent's room is {down the

hall} when you walk in. My little brothers room is {in the hall}also.

So is the bathroom. We have a living room (DO) and a family

room (DO) and a kitchen (DO). Well that is all (PN) {about 

my house.}